Looking over this one after some time away, I’m a little worried I didn’t quite carry the sense of activity between panels well. Any graphic novel is going to have things happen in the space between panels, that’s just how the medium works, but I don’t quite feel like one panel properly flows from the next, here. That’s something I’m having to work on, through this whole graphic-novel-based-drawing-practice-thing. Luckily, the next several action scenes have given me plenty of practice.
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New Eden, Page 23: Anti-life edition
Life’s getting the better of me again. Have some art while I sort things out. Eventually, we’re going to get to the point where I start realizing I need to make text larger to show up on screen. I look forward to that day.
AGLA: That’s what this is about? You abducted me over a video game?
Goon: Don’t play dumb. We’re not the Japanese police, we won’t fall for that. Our citizens have been disappearing directly after playing your game, and nobody knows how your machine works.
AGLA: That’d be more a failing of American engineering than anything else, right?
Goon: Do you even realize the trouble you’re in? If we’re not happy with the info you give us, you’ll be spending the rest of your life in a prison on the ass-end of the Earth! Now, what is your game doing to our citizens?
AGLA: Are you a man of faith, Agent Smythe?
Smythe: Answer the question. What has your game done to our people?
AGLA: Do you believe in Heaven? Hell? Valhalla? Hades? Different worlds the soul travels to after death?
Smythe: Are you refusing to answer the question?
AGLA: What about the Garden of Eden?
Smythe: Refusal will have consequences.
AGLA: The paradise God cast Adam and Eve from when they gained the knowledge of Good and Evil, and lost their purity.
AGLA: God left a guardian there.
New Eden Page 22: Reality Sucks
Goon: The tablet! Give it to me now!
AGLA: That’s what you were yelling about?
AGLA: Sure. Here. Take it.
Goon: Where did you even get that? I thought they took everything off you when you got on.
AGLA: Sorry, I’m not quite fluent in English.
Goon: Do you even understand the situation you’re in? You need to take things more seriously.
AGLA: You’re questioning me, right? Aren’t I supposed to have a lawyer for this part?
Goon: If you were an American dealing with normal police, then yes. You’re Japanese, flying over international waters, and we’re the CIA.
Goon: We can do whatever we want with you. Now, tell us about your video game.
New Eden, Page 21: Get it?
AGLA said he was ‘under the gun‘ right now! HAHAHAHAHAHAHA! I am the world’s greatest writer!
New Eden, Page 20: The Last We’ll See of Them for a While
New Eden, Page 19: The Calm Before the Storm
So, the game in New Eden, this virtual reality everyone’s a part of, is pretty much a virtual reality MMORPG with a bit of Minecraft mixed in. I’ve probably spent less than 10 hours playing traditional MMORPGs in my life, total. And I kind of like the creative process that why. I’m probably not going to create something that’s immediately recognizable, given my inexperience with the medium, but as a result, the setting, or at least this game, will be a lot more unique than if I tried to make a generic MMORPG with complete knowledge of the form, and hopefully, more interesting because of it.
I’ve got a lot of experience with MUDs, text-based MMO-style adventures, and that’s what I’ve largely been basing the game off of. I have no idea if most MMORPGs will let you pull up a list of currently online players, like LadyHate mentioned last post, but that was a pretty common feature to MUDs, so in it goes.
LadyHate: What happened to Annie?
LadyHate: What the…?
LadyHate: It’s never rained in-game before.
LadyHate: Clouds, too?
LadyHate: Annie, are you…
New Eden: Page 18, Life is Hard edition
AGLA:So, I’ve got a plan for this game.
AGLA: That’s why I’ve sent each of the Midknights a set with one of these premade characters.
AGLA: I don’t have time to explain now, but find Olympus.
AGLA: He’s in the game, and he knows the plan. He can fill you in.
LadyHate: Olympus is playing? Yay!
LadyHate: Between the four of us, I’m sure we can convince everyone to play.
LadyHate: But… I’ve never seen him on the player list.
AGLA: Yeah, he doesn’t show up there. You’ll have to find him the hard way.
AGLA: I’m pretty sure he’s the only giant in the game, so keep an eye out for him.
AGLA: Anyways, the favor. A
GLA: I’ll need you to do this when you get your set too, Hate. Anke…
Lorelei: Can this wait for tomorrow? I really have to get to bed.
AGLA: The sooner the better. This’ll just take a minute.
AGLA: Ok! To start, can you open your menu?
Lorelei: Menu? Lorelei: How do I…
Lorelei: Oh. I guess that’s it.
AGLA: Now, do you see your Creation Aspect at the bottom?
AGLA: Could you select it?
LadyHate: What happens next?
LadyHate: Are you ok, Annie?
AGLA: Hattie, I suggest you run.
New Eden Page 17: Wordswordswordswords
I’ve mentioned plenty of times before that drawing a story takes sooo much longer than just writing it, and that’s changed my approach to storytelling. Oftentimes, I ended up mentally developing the characters as I’m writing them, rather than having them all planned out in advance. That happened with AGLA here, who, later on, turns out to have some minor importance to the plot. He’s not completely out of character in this page, but the way I’ve written him since, he’d probably say the same things in a different way.
Also, no dialog breakout this time. All the words are on the page.
LadyHate: Does that mean you’re sending me a present too?
LadyHate: You asked if I hadn’t gotten the package “yet”!
AGLA: Well… yeah.
AGLA: I sent packages to all the Midknights.
LadyHate: That’s good. I was thinking you were maybe getting a crush on Annie.
AGLA: No, that’s not it.
AGLA: No offense Anke, I just wouldn’t want to make Silver jealous 😉
Lorelei: Silver and I aren’t together.
LadyHate: I thought I was the only one who could speak smileys!
LadyHate: How did you do that?!
AGLA: I’m cheating a bit.
AGLA: I’ll have to tell you later.
AGLA: I’m kind of under the gun right now.
AGLA: I’ve got a couple favors to ask.
New Eden, Page 16: No More Easy Backgrounds
This next page is going to change the face of this graphic novel forever. It kicks off a whole new era for this comic. This has a feature that has not been seen since Lorelei first entered New Life. For the first time, we have something in the background. Can you believe the innovation? I know I can’t and I’m the one who came up with it. Can I seriously be doing this? Is it even possible to draw a comic with backgrounds that are more than just two shades separated by a straight line? Well, time will tell.
So, I’m not good at backgrounds. Well, I’m not good at drawing much of anything, but I’m especially not good at creating scenery. This graphic novel’s supposed to be a big practice project, so of course I had to add them in sometime. We’ll have to see if I’m able to get any better at them over time.
LadyHate: Well, there it is.
LadyHate: The Kingdom Spire
LadyHate: Pretty cool, right?!
Lorelei: So this is the more there is to do?
Lorelei: Hang around a ruined castle tower… thing?
LadyHate: It’s not ruined!
LadyHate: It’s just not finished.
LadyHate: Bunches of players, they’re building that.
Lorelei: So you can build?
Lorelei: I guess that would give you something decent to do.
LadyHate: Yeah, but it takes a lot of players to pull it off.
LadyHate: You can get blood from the Asheaters, and mix it with the ash to make a kind of cement.
LadyHate: Thing is, even the Asheaters don’t pop up often enough.
LadyHate: To build anything of decent size, you need a bunch of players working on a project, just to get enough blood to keep it going.
Lorelei: Makes sense.
Lorelei: I haven’t even seen an Asheater in the… however long I’ve been playing.
Lorelei: How long have I been playing?
Lorelei: I really need to get to bed. I’ve got work in the morning.
Lorelei: Hate, it’s been lovely talking with you, but I really have to get some sleep.
Lorelei: Maybe we can do this again, sometime. Explore more of the game together.
LadyHate: Yeah! Let’s do this tomorrow! And the next day! And then we’ll get Red and the rest of the Midknights to join in!
Lorelei: Well, we’ll see, in any case…
LadyHate: What what?
Lorelei: Did you not hear that?
Lorelei: It’s AGLA.
AGLA: Welcome to Eden!
LadyHate: I don’t hear anything.
LadyHate: Just you.
Lorelei: Weird. Hey, AGLA. Hate’s here too.
AGLA: Really?! That’s odd. Just a second, let me see if I can find her.
AGLA: Hate? Welcome to Eden too!
LadyHate: Oh hey! Now I can hear him!
AGLA: Wait, that’s you, Hate?
AGLA: The young woman in green next to Anke?
AGLA: Guess you haven’t gotten my package yet.
LadyHate: In the flesh!
LadyHate: Err…. digital flesh. Nevermind! That’s a stupid saying anyway!
New Eden Page 14: Dead Batteries Edition
Just got through crunch time at work, and I’ve been working late all this week. Still needing some time to recharge before I can get back to writing anything, but in the meantime, I hope you’ll accept this next installment of New Eden.
LadyHate: You are Annie, right?
LadyHate: Please tell me I didn’t just glomp a stranger
LadyHate: NonoNO I HATE THAT NAME!
LadyHate: You can call me Lady Hate or Hate or Exodust or That Chick or Doofus or anything else, but not Hattie! I hate that name so much!
LadyHate: God! What were my parents thinking! Hattie Lim, that’s like the dumbest name ever!
LadyHate: Anyways, Annie! This is like the first time we’ve met in person! Or something close to it, anyway.
Lorelei:Yeah, and it’s weird hearing you talk. I guess I always thought of you speaking with entirely misspelled words.
LadyHate: What?! So mean.
LadyHate: And what about you! You talk weird too!
Lorelei: I do not! I’m just Dutch. My accent’s different from yours.
LadyHate: What do you mean? I don’t have an accent.
Lorelei: Umm… you have an American accent.
LadyHate: Americans don’t have accents.
LadyHate: We just talk flat. Anyways, what are you doing? I thought you and Red weren’t going to be playing.
Lorelei: Yeah, I’m just stopping in before I go to bed.
LadyHate: I didn’t know you even had a set.
Lorelei: AGLA sent them to me. I’m not sure why.
LadyHate: That’s the package you got! Why would AGLA send you something like that? I still think he’s got a crush!
Lorelei: I don’t know. His letter said he had some sort of plan for us and this game.
LadyHate: Hey! Then we can get him to play too! And if you’re playing, Silver will play, and that’ll be enough to convince the rest of the MidKnights! We can go full-force on this, like we do anything else!
Lorelei: Silver’s… it’s complicated. And I’m just on for a bit. I… well…
Lorelei: You said Exodus was in this, right? I was hoping to see him.
LadyHate: Ah! That’s the same thing that got me playing this game! People said Exodus was here!
LadyHate: Red was right though, it’s not really him. He’s like a boss enemy or something.
LadyHate: We can still go see him if you want, though! I can ‘port us there!
Lorelei: Could you? I’d still like to see him.
LadyHate: Ok! Just hold on a sec, and…