Someday, my art will be good enough that it’s worth investing in, and I will own a scanner. Until then, I’m afraid these low-quality images are the only way I have to document my work.
Anyways, the page! So, here we have Lorelei’s thoughts as our narration. I was trying to keep them short and clipped, like a stream of consciousness probably would be in the middle of a fight. Not sure if that quite comes across, but I like the idea. Think I’ll keep it going. Only way to get better at this sort of thing is practice, after all.
Panel 1: Hey!
Panel 2: What is this?
Panel 3: Movement. Just like in real life.
Panel 4: I have weapons.
Panel 5: Think I’m starting to figure this out.
You’re completely right, short thoughts add to the feel of the quickness of a fight scene! 😀 Good to see you still putting out your comic!
Well, you’ve read most of the rest of this, so if you haven’t gotten tired of the clipped thoughts, that speaks well to their utility.